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Write Me A Mountain
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Write Me A Mountain |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Write Me A Mountain ~*Marge Tindal*~ Write me a mountain that I’ve yet to climb Ink me poetic lift to far-reaching sublime Leave poetic footprints so it may be known As I follow word-crumbs that you’ve strewn Don a brook in the roiling bubble of rhyme Bridged ‘cross the crossable chasm of time Cascade the liquid-words in sparkling fall Down mountain reaching foothills in sprawl Ink not a turn unless refreshing the scene Moccasin movement on trails hidden between Indian past and the present, rhymed recall A time when Spirit of Mountain knew it all Write me a mountain that I’ve yet to climb Ink me poetic lift to far-reaching sublime Leave poetic footprints so it may be known As I follow word-crumbs that you’ve strewn ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Wow, Marge! You pen such wonderful visions. Enjoyed!! JL  |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
As always my friend, a wonderful and insightful piece of writing. hugs, Marti To the world YOU may be one person, but to God you are the world! |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Marge,How do you keep coming up with these? Very creative, martyjo |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
What a pictorial pleasure this is! Rae |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A most creative write Marge. And very inspired!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: This is wonderful! Both content and format! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
I am overwhelmed with the kindness and appreciation of you wonderful folks~ This one was actually inspired by a request from Ed/Ratleader for More-More-More! after reading this one - /pip/Forum94/HTML/002709.html I tried to oblige~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ Email - noles1@totcon.com |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Marge, I have been out to doctor's appointments most of the day.. and this was such a treat to come home to and read. Very uplifting write. Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Ahhhh Marge ~ So nice to stop by and read this beauty...so full of peace and inspiration...thanks for sharing ~ Bonnie |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
Marge this is just lovely. Betty |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
rivers and mountains...what will you think of next? I'll be watching for sure! |
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bubblesleave Member
since 2006-03-04
Posts 197Bloomington, IN |
Ya did it again! You amaze me. "As I follow word-crumbs that you’ve strewn" Hugs, Bubbles |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
what a beautiful spiritual piece Margie girl - inspiring! ~hugs~  Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis...I was going to write you a Michelle's mountain poem...but it just didn't come. I loved this poem!! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Well, MT... I have not said howdy to you in some time....sorry! I'm working on that mountain, just hang in there... Well done dear one.... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Marge, you have been doing a mighty fine job of writing rivers and mountains for the rest of us!  Hugs with love, EO  |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
beautiful marge My spirit will rise |
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sweetberry Member
since 2006-03-29
Posts 125 |
Good one!!! I enjoyed the write. |
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Androgynous Member
since 2006-04-08
Posts 71 |
When I read this poem, after I got through it, I just sat and stared at it for a while, it's almost too perfect, but just almost It looks like it has been carved, hard to explain, but I loved it And I also discovered that if you only read the last word of each line, that becomes a poem in it self, with lots of inbetweens, like..Rhyme Time Fall Sprawl Scene Between Recall It all Anyway, thanks! Love "How happy is the blameless vestal's lot! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you ALL so very much~ What a beautiful day to be a poetess~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Ed~ Get your hiney out of the gutter, Oh,  I mean the ALLEYand get thee in here~ *Huglets* ~*Me ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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