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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2006-03-23 04:36 PM



In the gray lasts of March
Its final snow
In mist rising from the ground

There is a sense
Of something changed

That what you were
Not that long ago
Is gone and never to return

So in fragile Spring
With its flowerings
One puts his hopes
Not in betters than before

Only in weather
A little more comfortable

Bread
Wine
And now and then
A slender bit of cheese



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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2006-03-24 01:16 AM


"Only in weather
A little more comfortable

Bread
Wine
And now and then
A slender bit of cheese"

Once upon a time, I thought that a nice nest and a slice a cheese would be all I needed.

Oh but I was wrong...but it is better than the alley, I do confess.

It is the heart that hungers yet...yes?

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2 posted 2006-03-27 11:17 PM


Eliot would have written it so....and in only 367 lines!

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Drauntz
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3 posted 2007-04-27 03:32 PM


beautiful life.
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