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Open Poetry #37

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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2006-03-01 02:45 AM

Was it not good
However crudely made
To eat ones bread
In an open field
Free and proud

To face the sun
To love the light
And warmth it gave
To minds no longer chained

Man turns to dust
And less more than soon enough
The wheel goes round
Yet never finds
Those it left behind

Was it not good
In what little time we had
To stride the road
Into our fate

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 2006-03-01 09:13 AM

The wheel goes round
Yet never finds
Those it left behind

How very true. *S* I like these practical moments of peace... courage shines here, too.

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

2 posted 2006-03-27 11:52 PM

Was....and will be...and this poem needs to be seen by many.

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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2006-03-28 01:13 AM

*thumping my chest*

and no, not even kidding

spartacus...my inner warrior

Ixtab
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 105
MEXICAlpan de las tunas

4 posted 2006-03-28 01:29 AM

This is enchanting...

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

5 posted 2007-04-27 03:31 PM

!!!!

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