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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2006-02-28 08:34 AM

malted metal milage
my teeth feel those edges
like licking ribbons
on camphor boxes

but the birthing occurs
90 months of a moment
you say the smile is worth it
and it is the first of many

you hope you make with me
in this room of windows
where you pretend to be
that lust tree's limbs

making shapes of our hours
with your weaving fingers
and punishing me slow often
behind our secrets hidden

as recess in your coat's room

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daark

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2006-02-28 10:57 AM

Dark Stranger
Bubble, bubble toil and trouble. Enjoyed

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2006-02-28 11:22 AM

DS

Recess was my favorite class....I liked four square and teatherball the best....you put a whole new spin on the coat room.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2006-02-28 11:29 AM

sir sy, thank guy, I enjoy your comments

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ms martie, such a school charm you have, thanks for the eyes

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2006-02-28 01:30 PM

Your ticket, sir...

Enjoyed, DS...

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2006-02-28 02:04 PM

ms sunshine
thank you for your warm

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

6 posted 2006-03-01 05:04 PM

"making shapes of our hours
with your weaving fingers
and punishing me slow often
behind our secrets hidden

as recess in your coat's room"

Hmmmm... dark and oh, so fascinating.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2006-03-01 05:45 PM

lady friend, thank you for watching this unravel

Air Goddess
Member

since 2006-02-11

Posts 108
Canada

8 posted 2006-03-01 09:55 PM

I have met this timeless
language of yours somewhere
before...but where?
Oh well, lets chalk it
down to a previous life....lol

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

9 posted 2006-03-01 11:28 PM

recess was always fun~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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