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Juju
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In your dreams

0 posted 2006-03-01 06:37 PM



The way you are, my friend.

You live in a crystal ball
When the world tries to get in
The glass breaks and you fall

You land on those shards
And then everything hurts
Because you work so hard

Every reflection reminds
What you once had
And now what you cant find

And so you leave
You run from everything
Because you no longer believe

In the blue skies
In your eyes

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*    Juju     *
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Marshalzu
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Lurking
1 posted 2006-03-01 06:45 PM


A most enjoyable read

Andrew

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2 posted 2006-03-01 07:13 PM


A fine poem with a message...thank you for the words..

Goldenrose.

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shades of paul
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In Reality
3 posted 2006-03-01 09:12 PM


It's in your eyes.......lovely....paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

The Lady
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The Southwest
4 posted 2006-03-01 11:13 PM




Enjoyed very much.

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