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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2006-02-24 07:25 AM



A chord was struck
drawing a picture once blinded
by unfortunate need

Stuck pages where loneliness
scrawled their image
and the cold of winter
seeped their slow melt

Paper thinning,
until disintegrating
into a wad of meaningless past
.
.
.

There lay a rose across the cover
life pages gone beneath
to be unspoken, unwritten,
unblinded ...
allowing the present
to be.

M



"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2006-02-24 07:42 AM


There lay a rose across the cover
life pages gone beneath
to be unspoken, unwritten,
unblinded ...
allowing the present
to be.


wonderful flowing prose my friend

Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2006-02-25 08:53 AM






BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
3 posted 2006-02-25 07:46 PM


A turn of the page never read so well.

Isn't life strange!!
  
Chin up Maureen, the best is yet to come, so I heard them say~

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
4 posted 2006-02-26 10:56 PM




Excellent read M.

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
5 posted 2006-02-26 10:59 PM


"There lay a rose across the cover
life pages gone beneath
to be unspoken, unwritten,
unblinded ...
allowing the present
to be."

Lovely verse, M-Lady.   ....jo

desert-spike
Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 194
TX/USA
6 posted 2006-02-28 12:48 PM


I just now saw this.

I love it. It carries its dark imagery as a tendril of mist creeping at ankle height through a vacant castle doorway.

Very nice in deed...

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