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OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

0 posted 2006-02-26 03:45 PM

THINKING
17 July 2000

Electrifying brain-flashes.
Puzzle-pieces of logic reshape into flowing smudges
of harmonizing voice-clouds and blasts of rainbow sky-smears

and the spirit savours sunshine and forest fragrance.
And new worlds
and new words
and bluebirds
swoop into the face
of stagnation
and stagnation explodes
into a volcanic display
of a thousand, sky-high petals
that flutter into larks
that turn
and soar
above the clouds
quivering with song
that echoes through the mind
and lifts it
to greet
the wind
and sun.

- Owl

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2006-02-26 03:54 PM

Diana

Like a breeze in spring time, your thoughts travel to me. Thank you.

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

2 posted 2006-02-26 04:51 PM

Thank YOU, Martie.

- Owl

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2006-02-27 05:55 PM

Lovely movement in this poem Diana. Greatly enjoyed.

StevenS
Senior Member

since 2005-09-21

Posts 945
L. A. (Lower Alabama)

4 posted 2006-02-27 08:44 PM

Nice ride I mean write. :-)

lgina
Member

since 2004-07-20

Posts 52

5 posted 2006-02-27 08:58 PM

What a good title. My favorite line "lifts up to meet the wind and sun." Really enjoyed this write.

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

6 posted 2006-02-28 04:09 AM

Diana, sometimes you are simply a blessing to read...and so is your poetry.

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2CatchASwan2
New Member

since 2003-04-14

Posts 6

7 posted 2006-02-28 04:11 AM

i love the imagery in this!

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

8 posted 2006-02-28 12:46 PM

Thank you so much, Kate.  Glad you enjoyed it.

Giggles, Steven, and thanks!

Thanks Igina.  I absolutely love thinking, as crazy as it sounds and the whole poem is the way I feel about thinking.

Thank you for your kind words, Ratleader.  I am glad you enjoy reading me and my poetry.

Thank you 2CatchaSwan.  Glad you did.

- Owl

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