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Rainbowdust
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since 2002-12-05
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Sydney, Australia

0 posted 2006-02-17 01:22 AM


Sometimes all the hatred,
idiocy, stupidity,
And everything else wrong in this world
Burns my soul
Like every surface inside my car
Burns my flesh
When I park it in the sun
On a 40 degree day.


The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

[This message has been edited by Rainbowdust (02-17-2006 03:25 AM).]

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Air Goddess
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since 2006-02-11
Posts 108
Canada
1 posted 2006-02-17 08:40 PM


hmm...yes...sometimes there is no
place to park but under the hot sun
just like there is no place to hide
from negativity, hatred...

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2006-02-17 10:39 PM


I know how you feel. Thank goodness we can stick together, and create our own shade tree or umbrella!

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
3 posted 2006-02-18 10:16 PM




Wow! A lot said in few words. Good work.

XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11
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Virginia
4 posted 2006-02-18 10:30 PM


ah   lol    ::bows::   Wonderful !!!
Rainbowdust
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5 posted 2006-02-18 10:36 PM


Thanks for all these comments, it means a lot, especially coming from ones as talented as you!

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

dgvarner
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High Springs, Florida
6 posted 2006-02-18 11:27 PM


it burns my soul too!  great little ditty

hugs, g

"We of the craft are all crazy...all are more or less touched."  Lord Byron

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