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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2006-02-12 11:02 PM



One Rose Away From Loving You
*~Marge Tindal*~



Borne on wings of petaled rose
the love I have grows and grows
Reaching places within my heart
that will not let your memory part
Petals falling open-faced, laced with
beauty they do represent my love sent
Their fragrance reaching far into the
night, touching noses with delight
Far away, you must know,
delight sent wafting
on this rose

~just one~
~rose~
~l~
~l~
~away~ l ~from~
~loving you~
~~~l~~~
~l~
l
l
l
l
~l~
l
l




~Just because you asked so sweetly~


~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -   noles1@totcon.com   

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The Lady
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1 posted 2006-02-12 11:09 PM




Exquisitely beautiful Marge!



jody5
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2 posted 2006-02-12 11:51 PM


Marge you are so creative and what a delightful rose you have made for this special day of love.


tracie66
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3 posted 2006-02-13 04:18 AM


Dear Margie girl~
beautiful, inspiring poem and I love the way it forms the beautiful rose...one talented poetess Margie girl

~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



latearrival
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4 posted 2006-02-13 04:49 AM


Marge another great piece of words with cleverness. martyjo
Betty
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5 posted 2006-02-13 07:36 AM


This is so pretty Marge
StevenS
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6 posted 2006-02-13 07:59 AM


Hi Marge, beautiful, I can almost smell the rose from here. :-)
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7 posted 2006-02-13 08:39 AM


How beautiful is this!!!
Awesome dear Marge!
Happy Valentine's Day.

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

sandgrain
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8 posted 2006-02-13 09:44 AM


A valentine rose of fragrant, loving muse!  How very unique, Marge.

Happy Valentine's day to you!

   Rae

Edward Grim
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9 posted 2006-02-13 10:35 AM


Marge, I am beginning to notice something; you never disappoint me. Every time I click on one of your poems, I know it will be a masterpiece. This too is a masterpiece in every sense of the word. So next time I see something perfect I'm going to say, "Now, that's a Marge Tindal". Cheers  - Ed

"Give me a museum, and I'll fill it."
- Pablo Picasso

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10 posted 2006-02-13 12:51 PM


Margie, this and you are precious...a very pretty red rose of a valentine gift...


suthern
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11 posted 2006-02-13 01:28 PM


Absolutely lovely, my friend. *S*
Bodger
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12 posted 2006-02-13 02:28 PM


Excellent

Dave

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13 posted 2006-02-13 07:23 PM


Dear Marge:  A perfect Valentine in every way!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

Marge Tindal
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14 posted 2006-02-14 12:58 PM



THANK YOU ALL~

Happy Valentine's Day !!!

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -   noles1@totcon.com

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15 posted 2006-02-14 07:09 PM


A rose by any other name--Marge
Happy Valentine's Day
  Danny

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16 posted 2006-02-14 08:19 PM


You certainly are just the best at "drawing with words" - lovely!  Happy Valentine's Day to all three of you ladies down there.
JamesMichael
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17 posted 2006-02-16 04:20 PM


Silky...James
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18 posted 2006-02-18 06:44 PM


perfection as the rose
soft, full of life, colors that radiate, warmth,  lingers forever in memory, from aroma of fresh~ sweet~  love~ life~
a gift of god   and a spirit of creations

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

dgvarner
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19 posted 2006-02-18 11:39 PM


very beautiful

hugs, g

"We of the craft are all crazy...all are more or less touched."  Lord Byron

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