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XOx Uriah xOX
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0 posted 2006-02-17 12:12 PM




Once, I chanced to see a falling star go streaking through the night;
And recalled the fable of "wishes", if done while still in sight.
But, the glow did fade behind a cloud and did not appear again;
And so, to wish upon that star, I knew would be in vain.
As on I walked, I pondered upon the wish that passed me by...
When I saw a tiny speck of light ahead of me did lie...
"A Will O' Wisp!", I thought at first, but it was still and did not dance;
Slowly, I ventured nearer, to get a closer glance.
What I found was a tiny rock, far too hot to hold;
After awhile the glow did fade and the pebble did grow cold.
"The Star", I thought excitedly !  So, it wasn't out of sight !
Then, I placed it in my pocket...
So that when I wished to wish, I might.
                                          
Once, I stood at a Wishing Well.  
I tossed my coin and closed my eyes...
When I remembered my tiny chunk of star, and it made me realize,
That it would be best to save my wish.
So, I filled a little jar...
And I placed it in my pocket...
With my tiny piece of star.
                                          
And, it was some years later, when I was fortunate to find...
Amid a patch of clover...One of the four-leaf kind !
I took the little clover and tucked it carefully away;
Along with my little jar and star...
That when I wished to wish, I may.
                                          
Years flew by and I grew older...to the man I am today;
Through the years, I've believed in God and to this day, do pray.
But, I kept my little wish things, for I knew there'd be a time...
When there would be that "special something" that I would wish were mine.
                                          
Finally, the day arrived when I could wait no more.
I realized, above all else, what I was longing for.
I needed someone special... Someone to share my life...
I wish I had someone to love !  I wish I had...a wife !
I opened up my Bible and there...pressed against a page...
Was my tiny four-leaf clover, all brittle and brown with age.
I took the water from the Well, that I had placed inside the jar...
I said a prayer to God above and wished upon a star.
                                          
God...He took each item and placed them in my wife;
And sent her down to be with me...that she should share my life.
The Star regained its glimmer !   The Star regained its glow !
For in the eyes of my beloved...its radiance does show.
And then, upon my sweethearts lips, God placed a special treat...
Moisture from the Wishing Well...so pure and Oh so sweet !
With the tiny four-leaf clover...God did a sneaky thing...
          To her blood...a touch of Irish !   To make life interesting.
                                          
Although I used my wish things, its to God the credits due...
For He fulfilled my every wish...more than I ever wished He'd do.
He took my prayers and wishes and made them all come true;
And sent to me...an Angel...by the name of Linda Sue !

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1 posted 2006-02-17 12:34 PM




Wonderful write Uriah!



tracie66
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2 posted 2006-02-17 01:04 AM


Bravo!
this is fantastic, it is interesting and visual and above all I felt the love and heartfelt warmth within each line...well penned and thanks for sharing.

~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



Rainbowdust
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3 posted 2006-02-17 01:26 AM


Awesome Uriah! Am quickly turning into a big fan of your work!

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

XOx Uriah xOX
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4 posted 2006-02-18 02:12 AM


Aw   Thank you all for taking time to read it and for your kind comments.  I am honored.
MGROVES
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5 posted 2006-02-18 05:25 PM


excellant. touching~
warms a heart~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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