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starinthedark
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0 posted 2006-02-15 11:57 AM



Please inspire me
give me back which I lack.
I have lost the will
From this merciful attack

My body so weak.
I feel you more now.
There is no going back
you have damaged and ravaged my body once new
and made me so dependent on you.

Please give me peace.
Let this madness stop for a few.
I'm tired of you.
Let me be with someone new.


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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2006-02-15 06:52 PM


sigh
healing thoughts for you
and your muse, too

iliana
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2 posted 2006-02-15 06:59 PM


It's hard sometimes, but I hope things get better for you.
FNG
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3 posted 2006-02-15 09:02 PM


'I have lost the will
from this merciful attack'

Enjoyed it.
You will get someone new

take care.

starinthedark
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4 posted 2006-02-15 09:52 PM


Thank you all for your kind words. hugs starinthedark
The Lady
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The Southwest
5 posted 2006-02-15 11:49 PM




So difficult. Hang on starinthedark.



XOx Uriah xOX
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6 posted 2006-02-16 04:09 AM


We are never nearer to the Light, than when the darkness seems the deepest.
((((((S)))(((T)))(((A)))(((R)))))))

tracie66
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7 posted 2006-02-16 06:34 AM


star~
winged ~hugs~ floating your way

Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



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Louisiana
8 posted 2006-02-16 01:59 PM


*sigh*... so many know this unwanted alliance... hugs to you for writing it so well!
starinthedark
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9 posted 2006-02-16 02:55 PM


Such comforting responses, thank you all. {HUGS} starinthedark
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