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Air Goddess
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0 posted 2006-02-14 01:54 PM


What a woman really wants (Happy Valentine to all)

While we are on the subject
She is not looking for Mr. Perfect
Or Prince Charming or Mr. Right
So don’t even think of Sir Knight

She is not looking for a hard bod
So don’t bring out a Mr. Stud
And as incredible as it may seems
Neither a millionaire made of dreams

Not a one still tied to the umbilical cord
Or acts as if he is Earth’s new found Lord
Not a one who will always run for cover
But one who will stay and be a Harlequin Lover

No, she doesn’t need a well-behaved pup
Only a strong man who is well brought up
She wants an ordinary, modern man
Unaware that he is God’s gift to woman

He is able to keep her chemistry on a stir
And will strive not to put anyone above her
Supportive and caring yet so daring
Totally loving her without comparing

Sensitive minus wimpy and weepy
A generous nature with some “skimpy”
For her he must always have the “hots”
She wants his honesty with some guts

One who can kiss away ordeals and pain
Instead of driving her up-wall insane
He loves all her faults and will tell her so
She really wants a guy with some verbal flow

He is able to keep some of his promises
And make up for missed ones with hot kisses
A warm sense of humour with some fun
A guy who will fill her with honeyed sun

He must have some inner beauty
That will worship hers as if it is his soul’s duty
Protective and caring with a possessive design
Capable of sending thrill chills down her spine

Intelligence and ambition relaxing with a kind heart
Independent, stable, responsible, excitingly smart
Not afraid of the kitchen and his feminine side
A guy who keeps up with the times in a stride

And after each ultimate trip back from heaven
She wants him to cuddle her till 22/7


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1 posted 2006-02-14 01:55 PM




All those ... a maybe a few more~

Happy Valentine's Day~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2006-02-14 02:10 PM


taking notes here.

the 22/7 is a great snapshot

perhaps 25/7 in thought
and 20ish 6 in touch?

enjoyed this ms

Enchantress
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3 posted 2006-02-14 02:18 PM




EXCELLENT WRITE!!!!

Happy Valentine's Day!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

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4 posted 2006-02-14 07:07 PM


lol, good luck! I am sure he is out there somewhere, and hopefully, not already wrapped up in some other lover's arms!
That's quite the list!
grinning at dark's reply, as he doesn't require much notebook space

Air Goddess
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5 posted 2006-02-14 07:57 PM


Marge Tindal, D.S, Nancy,MidnightSun,
thanks for reading me....

And believe it or not, he exists...
righ here in my home... :-)



JamesMichael
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6 posted 2006-02-16 03:45 AM


Nice...and you got what you want...fabulous...James
icebox
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7 posted 2006-02-16 05:52 AM


all these many things
just to fill your cup
when all a man wants
is one who shows up
willing

Air Goddess
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8 posted 2006-02-16 03:07 PM


JamesMichael, so good to see
you in my poetic world...

Icebox...remarkable isn't it...
all he wants is some willing while
she wants the whole package...
Lol...I guess he wouldnt be male
if he wants the same, hmm... lol

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