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lyricpoet
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0 posted 2006-02-13 11:17 PM


Sweet Angelic Valentine
copyright (c) Kevin Brian Wright 2005

O’ sweet Angelic valentine, how her love
kindles my inborn passions. I can see my
every desire within her eyes, where her
gentle touch could even melt me in the icy
frost of an Indian winter.

I would die outright for her love, for that
lovely face too dear for first glance, for her
eyes too rich for light and that breath of
beauty that has been a true reflection of
grace.

She is pure as an ivory dove of heaven, the
mask of night that gives reason to the stars
to sparkle. A celebration of life-giving love.
Every hour of sweetness on my lips that
takes fire in her every kiss. Which burns so
bright it vividly lights up a path to my heart.

© Copyright 2006 Kevin Brian Wright - All Rights Reserved
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Gaia
1 posted 2006-02-13 11:50 PM


this reads like an oldtime Valentine's write
lovely, and softly romantic

A Romantic Heart
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2 posted 2006-02-14 12:04 PM


your words have created
a very romantic, old fashioned
valentine, that shows adoration
beyond levels of imagination.

I am the old-fashion girl next door
type myself~

~ARh

lyricpoet
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3 posted 2006-02-14 06:21 AM


Thank you both very much for your words!
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4 posted 2006-02-14 09:38 AM



What a lovely read this day~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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5 posted 2006-03-11 01:14 AM


Que hermosa...esa poema!  There's so much love in this piece that I don't know what else to say!

Yv~Now singing the graces of others' lips....

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6 posted 2006-03-11 02:57 AM


This is beautiful

and then He created the horse...

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