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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2006-02-10 08:33 AM


She Lives

She haunts each hour’s argosy
A phantom in a fantasy
An essence that pervades the mist
Of flowers and of rainbow gist

She touches me each day and night
As lightly as a breeze in flight
Gracing me a height of mood
Like feelings that will not exude

The peaceful of the greenery
The odors of the scenery
The colors of a chaos sky
The blues and greens and gold on high

She stays with me a taste of honey
Like cuddling an Easter bunny
And breathing ozone harmony
I feel it like a symphony

Or do I overstate my case
This miracle of rose and lace


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LeeJ
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1 posted 2006-02-10 08:48 AM


morning Mr. Sy

if you see her beauty like this, you can't be amiss...

lovely tribute and happy smiles...

coffee or tea?

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2006-02-10 09:45 AM


LeeJ
Tea in the morning and coffee in the afternoon. LOL Good morning sweet.

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2006-02-10 11:01 AM






scorpio
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4 posted 2006-02-10 11:10 AM


A taste of honey....indeed Sy.  Beautifully written!!

believe in what your heart feels...

iliana
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5 posted 2006-02-10 11:13 AM


It's a good haunting, I can tell.   ....jo
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2006-02-10 11:48 AM


Earth Angel,
So where did you get that picture ofr her.
LOL

scorpio
A taste of honey indeed. Thank you

iliana
Yes it is. Thank you dear.

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2006-02-10 12:19 PM


Seymore~

'do I overstate my case
This miracle of rose and lace'


NEVER and overstated case when your quill
touches the ink of your will~

Happy weekend to you, sir poet~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2006-02-10 12:58 PM


Marge,
You are a sweet heart.

Rick
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9 posted 2006-02-10 05:01 PM


A beautiful penning Seymour and very much enjoyed. Your moments of thought and sharing make a difference to us all.

Sincerely
Rick

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2006-02-10 06:26 PM


Rick
A nice comment thank you.

Earth Angel
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11 posted 2006-02-10 07:31 PM


I searched heaven's net high and low to find her for you!
Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2006-02-10 08:23 PM


Earth Angel
Well then tell her she can haunt me for the rest of my life.

Martie
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13 posted 2006-02-10 09:51 PM


and haunt you she will.  Sy....such a lovely poem to someone special!  
The Lady
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14 posted 2006-02-10 10:08 PM




"She stays with me a taste of honey
Like cuddling an Easter bunny
And breathing ozone harmony
I feel it like a symphony"

So sweet. I greatly enjoyed it.

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15 posted 2006-02-10 10:28 PM


Wonderfully written... You leave me with such fantastic imagery
Broken
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16 posted 2006-02-11 03:33 AM


"The peaceful of the greenery
The odors of the scenery
The colors of a chaos sky
The blues and greens and gold on high"

This is just great! The words just roll of the tip of my tongue.

Yours truly
~Broken~

"Base not your joy upon the deeds of others, for what is given can be taken away."

Peter Steele

Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 2006-02-11 08:50 AM


Martie,
Thank you my dear.

Lady
You are very kind, thank you.

Dominique,
A beautiful comment, thank you.

Broken
Thank you for a wonderful reply.

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18 posted 2006-02-12 08:03 AM


roses and lace
the taste of honey
would warm any ladys heart
and forever a smile on her face

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Seymour Tabin
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19 posted 2006-02-12 08:55 AM


MGROVES
Thank you my dear it's nice to hear.

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