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HopeS
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0 posted 2006-01-29 07:27 AM



Woven Strand By Strand

It became a labour of love
With the future yet to be
Whoever touched my life
Blend into life's tapestry

Of friendship bonds woven
I treasure within my heart
For every thread attached
Loves the important part

Hearts fabric is intertlaced
Into the colourful tapestry
Creating it piece by piece
Threading hope eternally

Takes years in the making
Life is a continuous blend
Its woven strand by strand
Where dreams never end

HopeĀ©2006

Link to the poem with music and graphic below http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/96/poem_813342.html

© Copyright 2006 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
Fee
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1 posted 2006-01-29 07:41 AM


Such a beautiful image you have woven,

I enjoyed.

Hugs, Fee

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

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((T))    Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
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Katerie
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since 2006-01-27
Posts 92
Central New York
2 posted 2006-01-29 08:57 AM


Clear image- very vivid.  Nice.
nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2006-01-29 06:42 PM


Takes years in the making
Life is a continuous blend
Its woven strand by strand
Where dreams never end

love it Hope~~~


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4 posted 2006-01-29 07:54 PM


Just absolutely beautiful.  You write like a Victorian lace fan.  Beautiful, lacey and delicate, wanting the reader to read and re-read your lines.  I think this is one of the most beautiful poems I have read in a very long time.  I look forward to reading more of your poems.  AWESOME!!!!
Sheri Adams

Jesus lives in my heart!  He can in yours too!!!
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5 posted 2006-01-30 12:32 PM




Simply lovely Hope.



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