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Too Weak to Fly alone
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Too Weak to Fly alone |
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Courage2Survive Junior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 32 |
I lie awake at night thinking all the things that have one wrong and the ones that have gone right i am weak and I have failed I attempt to fly to turn around and say goodbye and then take flight but my wings, can't bear the burden of the weight that they need to carry because they are ripped apart and tattered just like my heart i sputter to the floor below without a moment passing, I begin to cry. because I am too weak to fly alone. |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Look down at your feet if you have them Put them on the ground Build from there That is how I intepret your words Dave |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kellie~ It is often in the walk that we find new wings with which to soar~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Fee Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381Melbourne, Australia |
but my wings, can't bear the burden of the weight that they need to carry because they are ripped apart and tattered Such a sad phrase. Just remember that you are never alone, nor do you nead to bare the weight alone. Have faith and hold on. Hugs, Fee Expressions, |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Such a sad poem but so real to life for so many people . I really liked it because I've felt that way before. But I became strong because of my faith. |
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