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Fee
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0 posted 2006-01-22 03:33 AM


Looking at the both of you
Perfection at its best
A son lays on his fathers arm
His face full of content

The love that you have for him
Always on display
He is looking more and more like you
In oh so many ways

The smile on his face and the sparkle in his eyes
He knows within his heart
He is Your Big Guy

There is no other place
that he would rather be
than laying right there with you
in your company


(c)FH 2006

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

0'.".'0  Just
((T))    Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
(```)_(```)

© Copyright 2006 Fiona Davis (was Hussain) - All Rights Reserved
playing.with.crayons
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1 posted 2006-01-22 06:37 AM


"He is looking more and more like you
In oh so many ways"

can't get this line out of my head.
keeps going over....and over.... and over...

must be special!! always, cheye xx

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2 posted 2006-01-22 09:28 AM



And it is just the beginning...
record the moments well...

the stories will be full.  


Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2006-01-22 11:35 AM


Fiona~

Such a beautiful page of your word photo album~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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jackiej
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4 posted 2006-01-22 01:52 PM


This poem instantly flashed my son-in-laws love he displays for my grandson. As I read every word I journeyed through the both of them which brought me joy. I really like these heartfelt words."He knows within his heart, He is your Big Guy. Beautiful poem Fee


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5 posted 2006-01-22 02:10 PM


Awwwww, what a beautiful poem of hearts!!
There is so much love felt in this poem!
I loved it all, from beginning to end.
Hugs,
Ethel

iliana
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6 posted 2006-01-22 03:13 PM


This is precious, Fee.  I have a son and can remember these scenes of him and his Dad.   ...jo
LifeSinger
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7 posted 2006-01-22 04:16 PM


this is very heartwarming poetry! you captured father-son love perfectly! nice work!
~Haley~

Martie
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8 posted 2006-01-22 07:41 PM


Fee...This is what life is about...and the best photo both with words and camera.  You are lucky.  
Fee
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since 2000-08-07
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Melbourne, Australia
9 posted 2006-01-23 01:55 AM


Thank you all so much for your warm words. I am glad that I was able to get you to visualise the photo that I had been looking at.

It was one that touched my heart.

BIGGEST OF HUGS TO ALL,
Fee

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

0'.".'0  Just
((T))    Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
(```)_(```)

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