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soul drifter
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0 posted 2006-01-13 12:45 PM


(I've actually remembered to edit myself beforehand this time, for in my original piece, I used a couple of expletives. I guess I love using 'em in such bitter wordage as this...)

Missing Piece

The missing piece
conspicous in its absence
at least it's easy
to sleep through this convulescence
this rising fall into defensiveness
it's all your fault, babe
and the bed's left unmade
and the missing piece lingers in my mind
one of these days I'd like to feel fine, but...

The missing piece
a hole in my perimeter wall
to spy on the peace
I can never regain for I've lost all
in this last card down to call
a wager on you, girl
and it's cold in the world
but the missing piece memories warm me
one of these things can do harm to me, but...

Keep your missing presence
and old Simon & Garfunkel records
and books of Shakespeare sonnets
'cause they don't mean anything to me now
'cause you don't mean anything to anything anymore --
ah, but you could always see through my lies
and frozen cadaver alibis
with my heart open like a reverse peephole on my door
well, don't look at me that way
hell, I've got nothing left to say
baby, hey

This missing piece
carries me through the weeks
taming the beast
on the corner with the loveless freaks
the slap still remains on my cheek
it's all you've left me, woman
and the heart's cracking again
longing for the missing piece to come back
one of these days I'll get back on track, but...

Well, I need your helping hand
hell, I've got eyes full of sand
baby, hey, stay
you won't, you won't regret it again
but you won't, you won't come home again
I'm an expert at fooling my fooled heart
sending back at the start
of these messed up trademarked male emotions
crying oceans, but...

Oh, the missing piece
it'd be the least,
the very least that you could do

"The moon ain't romantic, it's intimidating as hell". -- Tom Waits, 'Bad Liver and a Broken Heart'

© Copyright 2006 Zach Hilgefort - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
1 posted 2006-01-13 12:51 PM


This has a real bluesy feel about it in a very musical kind of way.  Thanks for sharing.  I hope you can complete the puzzle.  
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