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Dominique-Simone
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0 posted 2006-01-10 12:26 PM



Insanity
How is it
I have lost my keys again
The simplicity of an abundant operation
Fails to reason with my scattered life
Mounting the house I turn it upside down
And with two quick shakes
Still no keys

© Copyright 2006 Page McKay - All Rights Reserved
poe
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1 posted 2006-01-10 02:09 AM


I know the feeling all to well,I do not know if I could have put it across so well.

Tomorrow comes for those who fear it.
Today never ends for those who live it.

Dominique-Simone
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2 posted 2006-01-10 06:44 AM


Thank you
The Lady
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3 posted 2006-01-12 12:21 PM



I love it and I live it. Great write.

Dominique-Simone
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4 posted 2006-01-12 01:24 AM


Thank you again lady
Susan Caldwell
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5 posted 2006-01-12 09:54 AM


Reminded me of the "Ya-Ya" movie where she says she "dropped her basket" (I think that was how she said it)...

  Cool...

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

LeeJ
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6 posted 2006-01-12 10:07 AM


wish my keys were all I lost...
Dominique-Simone
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7 posted 2006-01-12 11:25 AM


Me too...The funny thing is that last night my brother lost his keys to the car and called me to pick him up at the movie theater. I guess it runs in the family
Klassy Lassy
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8 posted 2006-02-14 10:44 PM


Thank you for making me feel so at home here by reading Oceanside Evening.

Now reading this, I am smiling.  Lost keys seem to be the bane of my life.  I always have to hunt for them when I am in a hurry.  LOL  Boy! do I relate to this.

~ Karen ~

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