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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Trees stretch unashamed- snap their twigs at entropy- bare their limbs to God. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
very nice, what is it, Haiku poem? I believe so lol.. anyway, I liked I one, keep up the awesome poetry. Poetry can get you very far |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
We should be like the trees and bare ourselves with out-stretched arms toward God in the heavens!  A wonderful little write, Dear Pilgrim! Sending you a big hug, Linda |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Nan, what an image, stark, simple and astoundingly vivid. Wonderful job! Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Thanks so much, guys. Yes, it's supposed to be a Haiku--I try them every now and then. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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