Open Poetry #36 |
Love Came (senryu ...) |
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
With sunset colors— He blew out the candle— With a fart |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hmmm. I've heard of kids (usually boys) doing this sorta thing. I've also heard that those who do stop at adulthood, or at least the onset of puberty. (Hair being flammable and all...) |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
LOL.........at the senryu and at Serenity's comment..............heheheheh |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Iliana, Thanks. . . The critical attribute of a senryu is it's comic character reflecting on the frailties and foibles of human being. Yet like: how long forever nineteen nineteen of white dancers Anonymous (senryu) there is at least one other more poignant way of reading this. Thanks again. John |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
not what I expected~~~ *laughing* M |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
says in no uncertain terms, that he screwed up, big time... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Heh Heh...the first post I read this morning... Thanks for starting my day with a smile! Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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