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Open Poetry #36
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wordwizard
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since 2003-09-08
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on the way to next world
0 posted 2005-11-07 07:18 PM

He met somebody
how long will it last
as long as it takes
to get to the next
poor guy doesn't see far

one wants commitment
won't stand for the 'drama'
guess it's just the physical
there's a spiritual side
all in the same body
and fodder for conflict

there must be someone
break the hedonistic cycle
desires are rationed
in terms of staying on
love making evolves
one lady, one heart
tragedy comes with comedy
maturity will rise.
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ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
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my own state
1 posted 2005-11-08 08:14 AM

good read, my friends
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
2 posted 2005-11-08 08:22 AM

a wealth of words
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