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Open Poetry #36

Rose

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

0 posted 2005-10-28 04:36 PM

A rose
for you
to strenghen your soul
it's a life
that I want you to hold

When you touch it
with your hands
feel its inner-most-thought
It will help you through
the darkness
of your inner-heart

The redness in it
is the problems
that you've had
get rid of that pain
start a-new

See yourself as a rose
only without pain
just hold onto a good life
don't spread or live
in vain.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

xFromtheHeartx
Member

since 2005-09-24

Posts 80
Florida U.S.

1 posted 2005-10-28 04:38 PM

:'(, this bring a tear to my eye! awsome write...

Sharksbean
Member

since 2005-09-25

Posts 368
jax

2 posted 2005-10-28 11:48 PM

like you that poem was as beautiful as a rose thanks for sharing big hugs

keep em coming

-may the force be with you in poetry

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2005-10-28 11:54 PM

...a rose from a rose...

Poetryatheart
Junior Member

since 2005-10-05

Posts 16
Jax, FL

4 posted 2005-10-28 11:57 PM

nice write.

hope, love, is the value of poetry

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