And as you hold the Key, I hold the Lock

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Open Poetry #36

And as you hold the Key, I hold the Lock

greco
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since 2003-09-27

Posts 85
buffalo ny

0 posted 2005-10-24 09:13 PM

Ha i am in a huge writing mode for some reason today..

Your eyes lock onto mine
     And as the floor falls from beneath me
My Life lies in your hands

And if you turn away
     I just want you to know
That i would understand

And on my way down
     I will be thinking of you
And what i did wrong

As I hit the floor
     I see my broken dreams, like shattered glass
And how they were the death of me

A person will sometimes devote all his life to the development of one part of his body - the wishbone

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2005-10-24 09:59 PM

"Your eyes lock onto mine
And as the floor falls from beneath me
My Life lies in your hands"

~ These lines were especially riveting.

And open expression of your feelings of vulnerability ~ and love.

Love & Light,
EA

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

2 posted 2005-10-25 12:34 PM

interesting.

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2005-10-25 11:03 AM

Greg~
Sadly penned ... effectively~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

aujussy wolf

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since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

4 posted 2005-10-25 03:39 PM

greco , your poem hit home .... good work man ...its amazing what a lady can do to a guys world , what a spin they make on us
keep us going around , heartbeak is hard though ... takes a greater woman to heal a wounded heart

peace bro
~wolf

greco
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since 2003-09-27

Posts 85
buffalo ny

5 posted 2005-10-25 06:11 PM

Yes it is amazing.. but thanks all this really means a lot to me. i appreciate it greatly

A person will sometimes devote all his life to the development of one part of his body - the wishbone

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