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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2005-10-12 07:42 AM

The Less of More

The more I sew the less I know
Each particle of different snow
That shows a different shape each worth
The moment of its birth on earth

I look within extremes of shade
And follow close each weave of fade
Make a note each come and go
To add to that of which I know

The library that I prepare
Has bent the scale of my aware
On one side filling bit by bit
The other with the grit of wit

It is an ever changing scale
That’s grown much larger than a whale
And though it sticks inside my craw
I’ve little belly for much more

For I’m swallowed in its bend and
My candle splitters nears its end

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2005-10-12 08:39 AM

Morning hugs to you, Mr. T.

"It is an ever changing scale
That’s grown much larger than a whale"

"For I’m swallowed in its bend and
My candle splitters nears its end"

~ Hmm. Gives me pause to ponder your wonder. But never fear! Earth Angel's here!

EA

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

2 posted 2005-10-12 08:43 AM

Keep that candle lit Sy. Your words enlighten.

believe in what your heart feels...

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2005-10-12 09:09 AM

The more I sew the less I know
Each particle of different snow
That shows a different shape each worth
The moment of its birth on earth

Ain't that the truth?!

Wise words to ponder this morning Seymour
Thankyou for this.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2005-10-12 09:53 AM

yes, ain't that the truth, is to what I thought while reading the first line...
Your poetry is always like a first morning lesson from a robin's song...

Thank you dear man, for your great wise words.

Hugs...

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2005-10-12 12:16 PM

Seymour~
The more I see of YOU ... the less I think that there is any other who causes me more ponder~

'The library that I prepare
Has bent the scale of my aware'

My 'aware' tells me that I have prepared a library of you~
And it is ALL GOOD !

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

6 posted 2005-10-12 01:35 PM

I love how you take your words and sew them into my heart.
That is where I keep your library safe.

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

7 posted 2005-10-12 04:30 PM

You're a wonder, and your poetry? Magnificent.

adding to my library.

Maree

~i want for myself your trembling~

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

8 posted 2005-10-12 05:18 PM

It seems I'm the only one to read late at night so as I lay me down to sleep it pays to know ... we're all the same. Yes, I can relate fully to your poem. Good words! Thanks!

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

9 posted 2005-10-13 04:30 PM

I think many of us relate to this, my friend... Excellent work!

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