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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-10-11 12:54 PM


Attended a class
in which
a study
was shown

that concluded
that only about seven percent
of all communication occurs
by virtue of the words
that are actually said

the majority derived
from tone
and the way the body does
or doesn’t move

It struck me that those
whose faces
voices
reflect
not just now
but where they’ve been done seen
are at something
of a disadvantage

That those
who are marred by time
as well
have little
if any
chance at all
of being understood

So I wonder why bother then
To talk at all

Perhaps it’s best to be a tree

A maple, willow, the silent oak
not doing much except to breathe

Let others
who have nothing better to do
decide for themselves who you really are

Listen to the wind
instead of you
as you know they always will

[This message has been edited by Balladeer (10-23-2005 01:58 PM).]

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1 posted 2005-10-11 02:15 PM


John~

'only about seven percent
of all communication occurs
by virtue of the words
that are actually said'


Which reminds me of exactly why I prefer to read~

Love your take on trees .... reminds me of why my Cherokee Ancestors developed the "talking leaves"~

I liked this~
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2 posted 2005-10-11 05:28 PM


nodding

exactly my frustration on internet communication...

and it's also why I sat completely still in the shrink's office.

Much enjoyed.

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3 posted 2005-10-13 04:26 PM


I like this very much... especially the ending... so true!
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