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Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2005-10-12 01:09 AM

My Heart

My heart
I’m lost
But to
Love two
That is
Stupid

I stare at the lake before me
Waiting for it to freeze over

-Juju

Dragon Mistress
Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 289
Washington, USA.

1 posted 2005-10-12 03:37 AM

Very nice!

~*~I'm a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2005-10-12 03:53 AM

Not so stupid, Juju....sometimes, that is just the way it happens.

.....jo

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2005-10-12 11:50 PM

oh my, am shivering now
but it's OK to love two
you just can't give 100% that way

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2005-10-13 02:27 AM

Enjoyed...James

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

5 posted 2005-10-13 06:48 PM

Great write!

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

6 posted 2005-10-13 07:25 PM

somethings never freeze,
       they just burn on
              forever ...

    Love isn't just what you feel for another but
        in addition to what another feels for you.

       Your heart is whole.

CT

A word in hand is worth two in a hush ... CTOwen/05

StevenS
Senior Member

since 2005-09-21

Posts 945
L. A. (Lower Alabama)

7 posted 2005-10-14 08:45 AM

If you feel you must choose, choose the one who makes you feel complete. If neither does, just be paticent. You are young and beautiful, you gonna have plenty to choose from as time moves on. If the lake freezes over make some ice cream. :-)

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

8 posted 2005-10-14 08:47 AM

I think, and this is just my personal feeling, if you feel you love two, let them both go, cuz it's not real love, yanno...

Hugs and thanks juju for sharing.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2005-10-14 08:50 AM

"I stare at the lake before me
Waiting for it to freeze over"

Excellenmt write..lots to think about here.
Much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~Nancy

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

10 posted 2005-10-15 06:46 PM

Thank you for all of the comments.. I truely appreciate them.

-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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