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Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

0 posted 2005-09-28 09:22 PM

hello young willow…
your flyaway branches play in the breeze
like a coveralled boy’s tousled blond mane…

one last barefoot romp through the trees
on the crackly path
of an autumn memory…

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2005-09-28 09:41 PM

Beautiful imagery..simply beautiful!!
Hugs~Nancy

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

2 posted 2005-09-28 09:44 PM

sounds nice

dont snap the branches

Bodger

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2005-09-28 10:04 PM

Oh my goodness! This is just beautiful.
Keepin' it !!! hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2005-09-28 10:10 PM

I really enjoyed the feel and sound of this fall write. It's so good to read you again!

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2005-09-28 10:40 PM

Oh...I love the imagery of this!

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

6 posted 2005-09-28 10:46 PM

aaww this sounds like my weaping willow. so beautifully written in your words tho, and thanks for sharing.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2005-09-29 02:15 AM

A lovely autumn memory you have scribed! You put me in Rockwell moment that you so picturesquely scribed! Beautifully written, K.

Hugs with love,
Linda

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2005-09-29 10:43 AM

Enchanting write, dear Khalil.

I keep it too.

Love,
Margherita

Sharksbean
Member

since 2005-09-25

Posts 368
jax

9 posted 2005-09-29 03:24 PM

lovely just lovely

-may the force be with you in poetry

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

10 posted 2005-09-30 09:56 AM

young willows don't want to sleep ...

Obsidian Snow
Member

since 2005-08-24

Posts 88

11 posted 2005-09-30 09:58 AM

Wonderful!

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