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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2005-09-28 05:12 PM

When the world has been
               reduced to a dark night

just a  taste of ashes floating on  air

light&dark, earth&sky  will embrace such
beautiful harmony

a single petal made for words --
                this eternal image
of reflection   on   water

tomorrow I will rise early
to touch the  spread
of sun,     as the river flows through
my fingers

my dreams
exist just for me
                the very depth of edges
from these walls

that rain, will replace your
tears, in language only
you remember:

under stained glass
and woven colors
               scattered over the floor

and through the windows
               nothing will move

but the daffodils
folding their stems
to die

~~**~~
There are moments when speech
is but a mouth pressed lightly and
humbly against the angel's hands
~~**~~

Sharksbean
Member

since 2005-09-25

Posts 368
jax

1 posted 2005-09-28 05:22 PM

beautiful! Thanks for sharing>

-may the force be with you in poetry

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

2 posted 2005-09-28 05:24 PM

"...somewhat inspired," the lady says.....

Me, I'm "somewhat stunned" by this, and once again taking a lesson in how to write poetry which can do that......

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ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

3 posted 2005-09-28 08:56 PM

Well blended .....

beautiful!!

CT

A word in hand is worth two in a hush ... CTOwen/05

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2005-09-29 07:21 AM

"tomorrow I will rise early
to touch the spread
of sun, as the river flows through
my fingers"

Such beautiful imagery, Lauren ... this is a lovely read. Thank you.

Best wishes and hugs,
/Kit

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2005-09-29 11:29 AM

Wonderful write, dear Lauren!

quote:
under stained glass
and woven colors
scattered over the floor

and through the windows
nothing will move

but the daffodils
folding their stems
to die

Love the melancholy because you render it so masterfully!

Love,
Margherita

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

6 posted 2005-09-29 11:42 AM

It's kind of like having sand sift through your fingers reading your poems, soft, smooth, and tickles your innards (well toes in the case of the beach

I guess.) Lovely.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2005-09-29 11:44 AM

Each line is exquisite and lovely in its own "write" ~ a jewel set in a brilliant crown.

May the ink in your pen flow for ever more.

Love & Light,
Linda

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

8 posted 2005-09-29 01:09 PM

sigh..

you words always leave me with a sigh and feeling as though i have been touched by something so magical...

and beautiful....

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

9 posted 2005-09-29 06:55 PM

Lovely penning, Greeneyes!

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