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Angelheart
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0 posted 2005-09-28 03:42 PM


First depression

I made a big mistake
at the end of today
I accidently made fun of the person
that I have been talking to
day by day

She was beginning to be my best friend
She began to make me laugh
I felt like I was on the right path

I was cheering an old cheer
from my elementry school year
If I only of known
this was to pick at one of my best peer
(this was in a group of people, 4 or 5 to be exact)

My beginning to be best friend
took me aside
told me she was mad at me
because she thought
I was going to be her friend til the end

Now I am feeling sad
I literally could not do my work
I feel right now
the world is crashing down on me
wanting to releive this guilt
that has been built

I talked to a friend about this
she told me I should call her
if nothing happens there
then I will have to deal with the concenquences
which feels unfair

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

© Copyright 2005 Laura - All Rights Reserved
Sharksbean
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1 posted 2005-09-28 04:17 PM


this is very sad (warm hugs to brighten your day)

-may the force be with you in poetry

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2 posted 2005-09-28 05:28 PM


we all make mistakes....live, learn and grow from them.....   I am sure in the end it will all work out...

~~**~~
There are moments when speech
is but a mouth pressed lightly and
humbly against the angel's hands
~~**~~

sweetpoetess
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3 posted 2005-09-29 01:30 PM


This is something I have experienced all too well. I really enjoyed the read. Keep up the good poetry!!!

Poetry is beauty in words.
    

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2005-09-29 01:43 PM


A little bump in the road of life ~ but I know that it doesn't feel "little"!

Talk it out with her  ~ but if you cannot mend the bridge, then the budding "friendship" wasn't meant to be.

I hope you can work this out! One can never have too many friends in this lifetime ~ and others!

Lovin' hugs,
EA

garysgirl
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5 posted 2005-09-29 01:49 PM


I agree with what everyone else has said.
I have said things before that I didn't mean
to sound the way they did. Maybe if you will
talk all this out with your friend it will
work out. I am sensitive this way, too. I really
can't stand to feel someone is mad or aggravated with me.
I try really hard to treat others the way I
would like to be treated.

Good luck with your friend.
Hugs,
Ethel

Angelheart
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Jacksonville,FL USA
6 posted 2005-09-29 03:54 PM


~Sharksbean~ Thanks for the huggs ** back at ya**




~Greeneyes~ Thanks for that, we do all make mistakes and we do learn from them, it is a way of life.   I'm smiling now!


~sweetpoetess~ Thanks for your response and you do so to keep doing well in your poetry.
    


~Earth Angel~ Thanks for your open advice, and your right about of not having too many friends, and things will be ok, I just know it!  



~garysgirl~ Thanks  for your open advice as well, something like this never really happens to me, so very rare would I write this kind of a poem, I have some good news about this whole situation, in which I am going to be writting in my next poem, thanks for your wonderful response

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

iliana
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7 posted 2005-09-29 06:53 PM


You need a hug, so .......jo
Angelheart
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Jacksonville,FL USA
8 posted 2005-09-29 07:18 PM


~iliana~ back at you but with a

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

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