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Nibbling |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Nibbling I am half done, sharp pains accentuated by the need of unmet expectations. Knowing the result of justatouch could render me undone. A gamble, this with you, when waking in the blackness of morn. Too early to sorrow, too late behind these eyes to mask the fantasy, remembering. You leave me nibbles, steal away purpose, a harvest yet to be. These nakedthoughts gentled enough to part these lips in answer, a pretense of substance beyond the promise. "Shame on me" these thoughts, banking on tomorrow, leading you on... the getting use to me the desired result. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
loved the preciousness of the nibbles throughout...reflecting how one might be learning from another...great wording...enjoyed. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Lee...I guess one does have to nibble a little at a time to get the "full effect/affect/ion" of another.  M |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
I like this but I wouldn't like to comment further Bodger |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
hmmmm ... a nibble is just another step into the "right" direction .... thanks for the taste of this one!  CT A word in hand is worth two in a hush ... CTOwen/05 |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This leaves me wanting more....to see where the nibbling goes...I like the analogy. |
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