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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2005-09-15 09:53 PM


A Few Years Back
~ By Sue ~

All my life I had a desire
to be noticed by someone
to be accepted for being me
to be loved by someone special
to have someone to grow old with
I thought I found that someone
just a few years back
Come to find out it wasn't true
the love he said he had for me
turned out to be just pretend
Now, I live alone again, which
isn't always so bad
Some days are so lonely
I ask myself, what's the use
there is no one for me
I go to work then come home
to a house with no one there

9-13-05





© Copyright 2005 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
Angelheart
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1 posted 2005-09-15 10:50 PM


Well life is precious in its own way, you just got to know when to pass on with life, when broken relationships occur..  If you are meant to be with someone it will happen..  Do what you can each and every day and make it your fullest..God is here .. shining down on you and guiding you through the hard times...  thanks for this ..  I have the same problem but I know that it will happen to me someday ... thanks for sharing............

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

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just out of reach
2 posted 2005-09-15 11:16 PM


Ah, Sue, you're doin' just fine. Yes, it might be lonely at times, but in my experience, lonliness is better than remaining with someone who makes you feel alone.
Hang in there kiddo. True love might be just around the corner. hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

HopeS
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3 posted 2005-09-16 04:08 AM


I feel your sadness Sue , remember your friends are there for you

Hope

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2005-09-18 09:14 AM


SuzieQ~
There are times in life when alone is the most comfortable place to be, until things turn around in your favor~
Those times WILL COME ... Honest Injun~

Pour your heart out in words of share
you'll always find that friends are there
to pick you up and hold you dear
just know, sweet lady, that friends are near~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2005-09-18 09:44 AM


These are the learning times,
for thoughts to shine,
and an essence to be polished...

You're never truly alone,
when you have the ability
to believe...


Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2005-09-18 04:42 PM


Ah Sue...I just know someone is just around the corner waiting to meet you.
Hang in there...you're doing great!
Hugs~Nancy


I wait now at the lake or walking by the bay
I wait and listen or put a seashell
to my ear and it all comes back
the wind's soft murmur..and you.

Margherita
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Eternity
7 posted 2005-09-18 05:42 PM


I feel your sadness, dear Sue.

I am sure you touch many people with your beautiful heart and soul, you share love and the seeds you plant will carry fruits, you will see.

Sending you much love.
Margherita

garysgirl
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8 posted 2005-09-20 11:50 PM


Hi Sue, I feel your sadness in your heart
with this one. It touched my heart.
Heart hugs to you, dear lady.
Ethel

iliana
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9 posted 2005-09-21 03:35 AM


Sometimes it is better to live alone than with someone who would make you lonely living with him.   .....jo
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