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LeeJ
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0 posted 2005-09-20 09:02 AM


wholistic
impressions of old sounds remain
in the twinkling of an eye, channeled
ancient waters dazzling in all temples
there is “some” honesty
drawn from
the eyes of wind & sea and mystic waters
watching the beasts of fields,
to appreciate meaning
given to the nebula, permeating all space
biography of man, with his priestess
in fullest sense this infinite space
where they lived in transcendental energy
from involution, giving so that others may come
in the midst of where there are no boarders
so the banshee sings,
I let go of personal dreams
becoming radical, throwing myself to the lions
i am a spiritual practice of imagery


© Copyright 2005 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2005-09-20 09:11 AM


You are everything in your wholeness and your perceptions of the Whole are simply stunning. Fascinating complexity.

Love,
Margherita

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2005-09-20 09:46 AM


LeeJ,
Zip, Zip in the game of symbols.
Good morning sweet.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2005-09-20 09:56 AM


i am a spiritual practice of imagery


that's for sure~~~

M

Martie
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4 posted 2005-09-20 10:37 AM


LeeJ....I was going to say what Maureen said.  You have amazing word power!!  
iliana
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USA
5 posted 2005-09-21 03:37 AM


LeeJ, this makes so much sense to me tonight.  You truly are a spirtual practice of imagery!  Great write.   .....jo
ice
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6 posted 2005-09-21 06:54 AM


Applause!

The first and last lines are the top and root of a beautiful word tree, and the lines between branch well, out into the spiritual air of your feelings...a sturdy, well thought out poem.I feel comfortable in its shade...

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
7 posted 2005-09-21 01:09 PM


~so the banshee sings~

love this sweet melody
the whole write
sings to me

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
8 posted 2005-09-21 03:15 PM


Dear Lee,
When all of the superlatives have been used,
may I just say, excellent write,
and I echo all the replies before mine.
Hugs~Nancy

~Autumn.. the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08
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Jacksonville,FL USA
9 posted 2005-09-21 03:43 PM


Very interesting.  t hanks for sharing.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

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