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0 posted 2005-09-13 10:40 PM



luna shifts my mood
as her radiance expands~
frown turns upside down
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Chris Barker
September 2005
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© Copyright 2005 Chris Barker - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-09-13 10:44 PM


Usually the moon makes people act strangely. Glad to hear it has the opposite effect on you, Chris! This was very nice.

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2 posted 2005-09-13 10:50 PM


Very nice Chris..
Luna does change the way we feel.
Hugs, love and miss ya, Teed.

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3 posted 2005-09-13 10:52 PM


sky - yes, the moon when full often makes me want to dance around under it's light.
Thankyou & Hugs.

Nancy Lee - I know you want to dance with me under the moon....inside the fairy ring! Come on!
Luv & Miss Ya.  Oh, and thanks!

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4 posted 2005-09-14 05:31 PM


You know, I think you may just have a point there. My mood seems to go up and down.
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5 posted 2005-09-14 05:34 PM


This is good, and things like this can change the way that we feel about things.. this is one of them, thanks for sharing this...
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6 posted 2005-09-14 05:39 PM


Nice write Chris!

The spotlight can only get brighter.

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7 posted 2005-09-14 06:53 PM


Sue, Angelheart & Chris - thankyou all so much for reading and commenting! Hugs!
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8 posted 2005-09-14 09:01 PM


I think I saw that moon! Clever right and fun to read.

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9 posted 2005-09-14 09:40 PM


Thanks & Hugs Larry !!!
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10 posted 2005-09-16 11:43 AM


Nightshade,

You got me thinking about the moon again.
In fact, I recently saw it throught a telescope with dimples and all. Nice writing, I enjoyed much.

SG

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11 posted 2005-09-16 11:45 AM


Thanks SG. Hugs to you !!
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12 posted 2005-09-16 11:46 AM


Your words bring to life a vision of the moon and how it makes me feel when in full glory...I really like this poem...so few words that come to life so completely....**big hugs**

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13 posted 2005-09-16 11:50 AM


Startime - Thankyou so much for the kind comments!!
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14 posted 2005-09-16 02:28 PM


Chris....this made me giggle in delight!   ....jo
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15 posted 2005-09-16 02:30 PM


Giggling is a good thing...thanks jo!!
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A wonderful lift of spirit.

cm

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17 posted 2005-09-16 03:53 PM


Thankyou so much CM.
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18 posted 2005-09-17 12:34 PM


ChrisLane, this is beautiful!!
Miss you!!
Hugs,
Ethel


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19 posted 2005-09-17 07:52 PM


Hi Ethel Mae !!  Thankyou dear.
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