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Open Poetry #36

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Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

0 posted 2005-09-17 03:25 AM

leaves dip and swirl
in a wild gypsy dervish -
autumn ballet

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2005-09-17 03:45 AM

B E A U T I F U L ! ! !

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2005-09-17 05:59 AM

Beki, I truly do enjoy reading your vignets. They take me away to pleasant places. You create moments in time so vividly that I feel I am actually seeing, hearing, and experiencing them!

Linda

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2005-09-17 10:01 AM

the gypsy in me enjoyed this dervish swirl

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2005-09-17 10:14 AM

Beki~
As always ... you capture the movement of the moment and present it so beautifully~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Amen
Junior Member

since 2005-09-13

Posts 28
Brooklyn, New York

5 posted 2005-09-17 11:32 AM

Ahh...I love haiku....
Beautifully written.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

6 posted 2005-09-17 11:52 AM

I am so looking forward to this dance of autumn here.....beautiful image!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2005-09-17 03:23 PM

As always Beki....exquisite imagery!!

I wait now at the lake or walking by the bay
I wait and listen or put a seashell
to my ear and it all comes back
the wind's soft murmur..and you.

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

8 posted 2005-09-17 03:29 PM

This is very nice.. and thanks for sharing ......

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

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