Through The Rain a duet with Greeneyes

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ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

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Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2005-09-11 04:47 AM

through the grey of cloud
shrouded by the warming touch
in rays of wayward Suns
          ... I feel you

each tear
of glistening rain
a moments build
a time wished upon

more than a feel ...
but a hold
perhaps Autumn will look
different this year

   evenings slow decent
              from dusk

the oceans view of sky:

            I give back
that afternoon when the
     street was silent
that season of late summer
   and
tapping,  upon windows --
    rain,   full of ghosts

  "somewhere, there is soft reply"

I listen, passing through
inevitable tangles   I fall into place

    holding a memory

tears turn to waves
     this change of seasons

  colours of distant souls

          mingling
before the final peak
of a moments crest

          weeping
and  falling  once more

  to still grounds

  "someplace, there's a response"

memories reel
and flourish the wind

      .... through the rain

      thank you  ~  Lauren

A word in hand is worth two in a hush ... CTOwen/05

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

1 posted 2005-09-11 05:28 AM

quote:
colours of distant souls

          mingling
before the final peak
of a moments crest

          weeping
and  falling  once more

  to still grounds

  "someplace, there's a response"

... and thank you both for this perfect flow of beauty, where the heart's emotions are deeply felt.

Wonderful co-creation!

Love,
Margherita

Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

2 posted 2005-09-11 12:54 PM

I like this one.. You did such a good job..

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2005-09-11 01:02 PM

Beautiful flow to this lovely..
I cannot tell who wrote what, which is excellent!
Hugs to you both, Nancy

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2005-09-11 02:37 PM

ctowen
A ggod read, enjoyed the duet.

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

5 posted 2005-09-11 06:30 PM

hey...
thanks for reading, appreciate the comments...

lovE to all....
~~~

CT
lovE you...and thank you....always
~~~

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

6 posted 2005-09-11 07:42 PM

Yes .... thanks to all for the read and replies.

     As always ....  a pleasure to share
       words with Lauren's poetic mind
         and beautiful soul ...

                    luv ya 2

A word in hand is worth two in a hush ... CTOwen/05

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

7 posted 2005-09-11 11:28 PM

"each tear
of glistening rain
a moments build
a time wished upon

more than a feel ...
but a hold
perhaps Autumn will look
different this year

   evenings slow decent
              from dusk

the oceans view of sky:

            I give back
that afternoon when the
     street was silent
that season of late summer
   and
tapping,  upon windows --
    rain,   full of ghosts

  "somewhere, there is soft reply""

Great work on this one ya'll...seamless.

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

8 posted 2005-09-12 08:35 AM

Thanks Dunc ....

      the words "seam" to flow
         everytime we write together.

      ... it's the "real" deal!

   always good to hear from you Duncan.

     CT

A word in hand is worth two in a hush ... CTOwen/05

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

9 posted 2005-09-12 09:10 AM

HI Duncan...

Always good to see you...

thanks for stopping by....

~

CT...

~~**~~
It is the peculiar quality of
a fool to perceive the faults
of others and to forget their own
~~**~~

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

10 posted 2005-09-12 09:47 AM

Claps of appreciation for this fine collaboration!

You sang a lovely song together! I can still hear it in my heart...

Linda

Obsidian Snow
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since 2005-08-24

Posts 88

11 posted 2005-09-12 10:06 AM

Wonderful Duet!

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

12 posted 2005-09-12 10:13 AM

Hi Linda...

thank you for that sweet comment....and for stopping by....hugssss

~

OS...thank you too, and Welcome to Passions....
~

Gentle Spirit
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Posts 13989

13 posted 2005-09-12 10:30 AM

  weeping
and  falling  once more

  to still grounds

  "someplace, there's a response"

memories reel
and flourish the wind

      .... through the rain

BRAVA!!  excellent dueting.

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

14 posted 2005-09-12 11:31 AM

Hi Donna....

thank you for stopping by

luv you....

~~**~~
There are moments when speech
is but a mouth pressed lightly and
humbly against the angel's hands
~~**~~

Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

15 posted 2005-09-12 01:09 PM

This is good... thanks for sharing....

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

16 posted 2005-09-12 05:59 PM

nice write you two

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

17 posted 2005-09-12 06:25 PM

beautiful you two!

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

18 posted 2005-09-12 07:31 PM

I believe this was one of our better duets ....
       it felt like it wrote itself.

   Linda, hearts can feel the words
           TY for stopping by

   OSnow, yes, welcome and TY

Donna, a gentle spirit does flourish the winds!!
thanks for thr reply

   Angelheart, sharing is what we do best, TY

   Vandana, TY, hope to see more of you as well

   Meghan,

   wishing a little rain comes your way ...
               and hoping all is going well.

           *  thank you all!  *

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

19 posted 2005-09-12 08:15 PM

Beautifully Written~~

M

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

20 posted 2005-09-12 08:35 PM

Nice to see you sweet Lady Wynter!!
       How's school?
       ... the fair?

       catch up with you later!!  LOL

             Thanks for stopping in!

          CT

A word in hand is worth two in a hush ... CTOwen/05

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