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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2005-07-15 10:37 AM

{"Incase I can read his mind,
he dreams in his own language"}

I wanted to tell you;
      remind you of
blinding light,      angels
sliding,    like fire   until
night        breaks  sea

I wanted to hear you
      reminding me of
distant dreams,   heaven
singing,   with desire  it
seems      aches me

I glanced away:
I couldn’t understand
       summer rain   tapping
silent glass

too much pane
   shattering my demand
      to sea you calm,
and surpassed

   giving me time to think
while the world sails   on,
over harmony,   or how
clocks of stone time,
strike walls of black

          the mind; endless in
  belonging      thoughts
        on the   horizons
  waiting    to  speak
     and be  heard

In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes this art

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2005-07-15 10:41 AM

*wow*

I LOVE this!! I am keeping this..SO beautiful....what a seamless duet...so well done.

"I wanted to hear you
      reminding me of
distant dreams,   heaven
singing,   with desire  it
seems      aches me

I glanced away:
I couldn’t understand
       summer rain   tapping
silent glass

too much pane
   shattering my demand
      to sea you calm,
and surpassed"

Will read this one over and over....

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-07-15 10:48 AM

love the patience in this, the chart of reason, and the ability of love...

essense touches and bestows
gloriously brightening the touch of soul

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2005-07-15 10:58 AM

Yes, a truly wonderful blending of words and thougths.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2005-07-15 12:26 PM

Brava! A fantastic duet!
This one is library bound!
~Hugging you both~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

5 posted 2005-07-16 02:44 AM

Thank you ladies for your replies ....

     ... it was a pleasure to write with Lauren again.

        .... words came easily to heart.
           Inspirations plenty!!

                                 * Ct

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2005-07-16 09:07 AM

Beautiful, the both of you here.

I cannot tell where the sky ends and the land begins.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

7 posted 2005-07-16 11:20 AM

brava

JesusChristPose
Senior Member

since 2005-06-21

Posts 777
Pittsburgh, Pa

8 posted 2005-07-16 11:49 AM

Beautifully written...

I glanced away:
I couldn’t understand
summer rain tapping
silent glass

~ This moment

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

9 posted 2005-07-18 08:43 PM

thanks again evryone!

      your replies do mean alot.

            I had hoped Lauren had a few words to share ...
               perhaps on the horizon ... !!

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

10 posted 2005-07-19 03:59 PM

LOL my PC has been just down right mean lately, so I apologize for being so late on the replies....

Craig...you know I love ya...and thank you for writing this with mE...

~

thank you all that took thE time to rEad and rEspond, I appreciate, as I know Craig does as well..... look forward to the next timE around...

hugsss and love to all....

mE~

In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes this art

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

11 posted 2005-07-19 10:06 PM

Computer still has got you down? ...

       ..... sorry to hEar, I hEard somEthing was going around ...

           let me know when you feel like dueting again!!!

                 always a plEasurE!

* Ct

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

12 posted 2005-09-12 08:48 PM

.... just wanted to bring this back to the top for another round ....

        am AMAZED at how inspired one can be,
          and touched by anothers very soul.

      You have taught me much Lady L ...

CT

A word in hand is worth two in a hush ... CTOwen/05

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