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Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08
Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

0 posted 2005-09-10 09:14 PM




My fantasy of who I like
Is not a myth but he is one person of course I'd like to kiss
I seemed to of known him forever in my days
He has sure brightened out my days
He has made me smile all these days too
I just love to share my life of what gifts he gave me that has come true
I seem to care about him very well
I want to be with him so badly but that is just a fantasy as well

I dream of our life
And how we would be together
And if that world last forever?

You cannot rush into things when it comes to love
Because you don't know if that love will last
Or if it will pass

It is good to have dreams of the person you want to be with
And what we two would do
I just want to open minded of him
and find out if it is meant to blend
rather or not if we should just be friends

© Copyright 2005 Laura - All Rights Reserved
sweetpoetess
Member
since 2005-02-27
Posts 428
Florida
1 posted 2005-09-10 11:44 PM


A lot of good advice here my friend. Awesome poem.

Poetry is beauty in words.
    

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2005-09-11 12:21 PM


Enjoyed...James
iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
3 posted 2005-09-11 01:12 AM


Sounds pretty smart to me.  
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