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Beki
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since 1999-09-15
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Newport Beach, CA, USA

0 posted 2005-09-10 09:46 PM


Missing you
Is a dull ache beneath my breast.
Some days hurt more than others,
Some nights I never sleep.
I long to have you
Near me,
Giving touch for touch, kiss for kiss.

You alone can ease this ache.
One day you will know it, too.
Until then, remember I love you.

© Copyright 2005 Rebecca Reese - All Rights Reserved
Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08
Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA
1 posted 2005-09-10 10:09 PM


sounds like a good love poem and I like it...thanks for sharing...
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2005-09-11 12:33 PM


Silky...James
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2005-09-11 05:45 AM


Yes the ache of missing someone can do this.

You should try to sleep though ... you might dream of a new reality ... that will ease the pain of yearning.

Lovely!

Love,
Margherita


Rick
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
4 posted 2005-09-11 08:07 AM


Beki, a lovely write enjoyed, thank you for sharing.

Sincerely
Rick
  

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