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DennisTheMenace
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0 posted 2005-09-06 03:46 PM



It was like lilacs*1 entered my room,
Her body was a visual perfume,
A poem come quickly and gone too soon,*2
A moment, a week, a year went by, *3
Beautiful image branded on my eye,*4
As she left my  desire did fly
Barely keeping my heart with a swallow, *5
I wanted to jump up and follow,
But knew it must wait till tomorrow. *6

Menace.
Ha Ha


*1 OK it was something floral, lilacs sounded good.
*2 She was returning a CD
*3 maybe 90 sec.
*4 I'm fairly sure she was blonde haired and blue eyed
*5 more like a gulp!
*6  Probably next weekend.


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Larry C
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1 posted 2005-09-06 04:32 PM


hahaha, You ARE a menace, I mean funny guy.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

DennisTheMenace
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2 posted 2005-09-06 06:40 PM


Thnx Dude, Ya got any menacing ya want done
Direct me, I’l sic em 4 ya

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