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Rick
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0 posted 2005-09-03 07:31 AM


Nature’s strength is far surpassed to what man might expect
We’re dwellers on this land called earth, for which we’ve no respect
And in the end we’ll suffer for the tragedy called greed
Wanting more, expecting more than what we’ll ever need

The sunny days with clear blue skies are few and far between
Which soon will be just memories that our forefathers had seen?
Our future doesn’t look so good for we who dare to see
For far too long, for too much time the devils hand was free

We look upon the tragedies that in the world occur
But after just a small short time its cause becomes a blur
We live on average 50 years and what a mess we make
To pass away when time has passed so blame to never take

I as others question, yet we’re still the silent one
Who watch and then express our thoughts, though little more is done
We seem to just except what is as normal and Gods way
But more our Globe is warming with the coming of each day

The modern age with all its good does come with so much bad
And in the future coming years the memories will be sad
Unless we all speak up with voice, toward a cause be bound
Today’s the day to start a way of turning things around


For unless we do, the future will be a sentence.
Already it may be too late.

© Copyright 2005 Rick Van Weenen - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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1 posted 2005-09-03 09:23 AM


Hi, Rick! We should all think green! Save our planet ~ save ourselves!

Man just keeps on taking and taking and gives very little back! Gaia is not very happy!

"We live on average 50 years and what a mess we make"

~ "50"?!? Oh, no! Say it isn't so! lol

Loves 'n hugs,
Linda

Michael
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2 posted 2005-09-03 10:00 AM


Great poem, Rick. Message heard loud and clear.  
Rick
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3 posted 2005-09-03 06:30 PM


Dear Linda, 50 is my average, with so many poeple dying young now, it could be 60, in the new age we are living longer, a lot of my friends are gone and well before their time, we might live to 100 and bring the average up a little more my friend. The line of right and wrong can be crossed so easily, all we can do is our best.
Thank you for your reply, always appreciated and enjoyed Linda, have a great day, today here it is father's day, I have opened my cards and presents and will have a nice day with family.

Michael, thank you for your reply, I hope it is a message that many hear, it may also be a little too late, forgiveness and repair can take a long time, sometimes too long. Be well my friend and have a great day.

Sincerely
Rick

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4 posted 2005-09-03 10:54 PM


very powerful message here my friend

glad I got to hear you

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5 posted 2005-09-04 10:17 AM


yes a good message~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2005-09-04 10:30 AM


Rick
I guess I've started on my second fifty and to tell the truth it's worst than the first fifty. LOL Excellent write

Honeybunch
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7 posted 2005-09-04 10:53 AM


Yes, a message heard and understood.  Thank you!  
JamesMichael
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8 posted 2005-09-06 05:54 PM


Tell me about it...why I think you have...James
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