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The Flowers in the Rain
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The Flowers in the Rain |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Quickly close yon flower When rain come with it rebirthing power Moistening the ground With a rhythmically melodious sound. Sway on the breeze soft Bend with the wind that blows leaves off, Quiver with the thunder As you drink deep down under, Return after tonight’s shadow Be there when comes the morrow When I will come and pluck; ahh, well you make up the last line yourself Gloom |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
~a blossom called good luck~ LOL |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Midnitesun Well done, none of my thoughts were flowing that way, Pleased to have your words mingle With mine Gloom |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
anytime  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
and by your thorn be stuck? |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
~And kiss thine petals with a lover's suck~ Sorry...that's the best I could do...not really all that good at the ryhming thing. Lovely poem...however...not to be marred by my ridiculous line! Yv~Seeing eternal Sunshine |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Return after tonight’s shadow Be there when comes the morrow When I will come and pluck In my lapel, I'll tuck. For all to see the splendor Nature's colors render And on that sweet morrow greet All passerbys I meet. Much enjoyed, Professor-not-so-gloomy.  ......jo |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
~all the thoughts that ran amuck~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Return after tonight’s shadow Be there when comes the morrow When I will come and pluck; And finally rid me of this sorrow.  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Quickly close yon flower When rain come with it rebirthing power Moistening the ground With a rhythmically melodious sound. Sway on the breeze soft Bend with the wind that blows leaves off, Quiver with the thunder As you drink deep down under, Return after tonight’s shadow Be there when comes the morrow When I will come and pluck; Of iridescence struck |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I'm just going to flirt with the lingering thought you have provoked....  this aches..and makes my heart ache as well...If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
"Tis the beauty that grows in muck" Sorta comical. Or what about, "Curse this hole in which my head is stuck!" If it were me, I might prefer the latter, "ladder." Um, but yeah, nice write. -GIS Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes |
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