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Death By Silence
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Death By Silence |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough 
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You can't hear it it makes no sound yet if the heart could break you'd hear that all around It's simply, yet painfully said as so: Death By Silence Tell me if you know Do you know that hearts break here souls are trapped trapped in within that place that no one can see or hear It's Death By Silence No words are allowed hell, even tears can make noise on quiet nights like these I have heard them though the story has it - that it makes no noise Liars! I heard each tear drop squeezed from my eyes roll down my face salt on my lips and then gather at the bottom of my chin, then removed by the back of my hand Death By Silence they say... They never heard the tears fall The day you walked away. How do you tell when you're out of invisible ink? |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
yes it is that darn silience huh? -Juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
very moving The Mongrel cat came home, Holding half a head proceeded to show it off to all his new found friends |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I remember reading this ...wow |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
You could not have written it more precise. I know EXACTLY how this feels.  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I heard each tear drop squeezed from my eyes roll down my face salt on my lips and then gather at the bottom of my chin, then removed by the back of my hand Death By Silence they say... They never heard the tears fall The day you walked away. definitely felt this..love the new picture *s M |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Excellent, I could almost hear the silence. late |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
To others it may be silent, but to the one whose heart is breaking, the sound is that of shattering glass, and those tears drop like thunder...yes, I understand this...all too well. I appreciated the beauty of this writing, and have it now in a special place. Well done, my friend, ~S~ Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life |
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