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Ericc
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0 posted 2005-08-09 03:37 PM



At the far end of
my gaze...

There are no distinctions.

The world falls seamless to
my eyes.



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1 posted 2005-08-09 03:46 PM


This is so very beautiful. *S* Excellent!

But I couldn't help but smile over a very personal interpretation... I'm trying to get used to no-line bifocals... so my world is definitely NOT seamless! *G*

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2 posted 2005-08-09 04:00 PM


Beautiful Eric as always!
Hugs~Nancy

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

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3 posted 2005-08-09 04:16 PM



Age is good
for that seamless approach...

Well done, Sir.

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4 posted 2005-08-09 04:24 PM


what a wonderful way of looking at things....much wisdom in this...

In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes this art

Bodger
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5 posted 2005-08-09 05:26 PM


I'm on variable focus and I often expect the horizon to change font so I can see it.

Good words Eric

Bodger

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6 posted 2005-08-09 06:10 PM


Eric, this is just beautiful...I'm amazed at how you keep doing it.

I've missed reading you.

passing shadows
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7 posted 2005-08-21 11:18 AM


seamless...yes
Bodger
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8 posted 2005-08-21 05:17 PM


Eric

Lengthen your talent

It is a gift and a fit

Talk more in your words

Bodger

Ericc
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9 posted 2005-08-21 05:40 PM


Thanks for the feedback Bodger.
I've worked years to shorten my words.
I'm almost there.

Thanks again.

Eric

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10 posted 2005-08-23 12:47 PM


Ericc, I'm reading a book about learning to draw from the right side of the brain.  I believe you must write from the right side, as you always enable my imagination to form a whole picture.  You did it again with this one.   .......jo
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