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jwesley
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0 posted 2005-08-21 11:19 AM



A Slower Pace

Raced around the yard this morning.
You know – stopped at every flower
to admire Mother Nature's taste,
looked down my nose at every weed I saw,
kicked a tuff of grass or two,
paused every foot or so
to see how every thing looked –
every angle a different perspective,
a different view.
Found myself back where I began
an hour later, out of breath
from the pace I’d set,
the wondrous sights I’d seen,
the beauty I’d beheld.
Raced around the yard –
tomorrow, I’ll set a slower pace.

© w. james beard, jr.
august 2005

© Copyright 2005 Wesley James Beard, Jr. - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2005-08-21 11:24 AM


nice
nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2005-08-21 12:41 PM


lovely  ...

but this one I totally agree with..and tomorrow is the day for me

looked down my nose at every weed I saw

M

littlewing
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3 posted 2005-08-21 02:32 PM


*grin*

did the same thing myself this afternoon
and the subtext here is exactly what I NEED to do . . .

inkedgoddess
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4 posted 2005-08-21 10:15 PM


slow down
you move too fast
gotta make the summer last


littlewing
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5 posted 2005-08-21 10:42 PM


kickin' round
the cobblestones . . .

now I wanna listen to Bookends . . .

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2005-08-21 11:30 PM


I hearya, James! ~ and I saw ya!

I enjoyed the vision of your yard-trip-ing!

Tomorrow, take it nice and easy!

Big, warm hug and a smile!
Linda
P.S. Don't be such a stranger! It seems like it's been ages!

garysgirl
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7 posted 2005-08-21 11:44 PM


James, I enjoyed your trip around the yard,
but let's do slow down some tomorrow so we
can enjoy the flowers more. LOL
Hugs,

iliana
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8 posted 2005-08-23 12:49 PM


Jimmy, sounded good to me!   ...jo
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