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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Glare By: Noah Eaton 8/1/05 The dream was always running ahead of me, you’ll feel less with every little bit more you see, tonight I feel revirginated staring up into space, feeling like I haven’t seen anything... ...your forehead was kissed by firefly sonata, made you a precious day-glo tiara, each blinking star between each young kiss, challenging the Fermi paradox... ...I feel as though I’ve lost my legs, but, baby, you make me brave enough to go ahead… ...up and away… ...up and away… Ooohhh, it’s love at first sight, every time I see you… ...gleaming in the glittering glare… Chocolate daisies must have called your name, tutored with mignonettes in the summer rain, foo fighters flicker like opaline snow owls, groping the world in a snowblink of involuntary praise... ...from the touch of your fingertips, we’re sparkling amidst this total solar eclipse, there’s polyphony between every heartbeat, and in this moment there’s pure clairsentience... ...I feel as though I’ve lost my legs, but, baby, you make me brave enough to go ahead... ...up and away... ...up and away... Ooohhh, it’s love at first sight, every time I see you... ...gleaming in the glittering glare... Ooooohhhh... ooooohhhh... ooooohhhh... ...it’s when two look at each other beyond three winks, that it all becomes a miracle, sweet darling... Ooohhh, it’s love at first sight, ooohhh, it’s love at first sight, every time I see you… ...gleaming in the glittering glare... Infinity’s in the palm of your hand, but forever rests in the stardust of each eyelash, each hot youthful tear I will collect, lathering your face in glare with my heart’s content... "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" Mother Teresa |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My goodness! When you truly do meet your dream girl, she is certainly going to have the most exquisite love poems and songs rained upon her! She better hurry on and find you! She doesn't know what she's missing out on!  I absolutely adored this! Hugs with love, Your friend, Linda |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Loved this Noah. You most certainly have a way with words. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! The lucky gal who grabs you! She'll be begging you to sing to her all the time. Wish I could hear this one put to music. Much enjoyed dear Noah.. Hugs~Nancy Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Noah, I know exactly how this feels!! And I know you will one day, too, my friend. I enjoyed reading this. Hugs, Ethel |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Oh wow...I've died and left this wretched Earth and have in turn found your arms and your fingertips slowly playing melodies with your words. Whew! Sorry about that! You make me just feel like spouting poetry! You are poetry...O' Sweet Angel o' Mine! Lovely write! Brilliant! Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Noah Angel......this was really romantic. I loved the lines "tonight I feel revirginated staring up into space, feeling like I haven’t seen anything." You are so creative!!!! Be well, friend!!!  .......jo |
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poe Member
since 2004-09-06
Posts 180Heading to China |
A gift you were given, and you should always cherish it. Your expression here is as uplifting as it is pure. Keep on wiriting Tomorrow comes for those who fear it. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
"Ooohhh, it’s love at first sight, every time I see you…" Now that is a smooth line! among many smooth others in this poem...  enjoyed ---------ice/ford ><> |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Croon away Noah !! Love this one. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
The dream was always running ahead of me, you’ll feel less with every little bit more you see, tonight I feel revirginated staring up into space, feeling like I haven’t seen anything... the entire song Noah was intensly enveloping, but this, the first paragraph is the basics of life...and that my friend is a very humble piece of Noah....  |
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