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Enchantress
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0 posted 2005-07-30 08:23 AM






Golden rays from God's Heaven
Filter through the atmosphere
Molding days as they happen
To give us life and make ways clear.

Eternal darkness now is gone
Man awoke ~ as did Creation..
And, as each new daybreak shone
Mankind knew determination.

Generations change with duty
To arrange desire of our eyes
Let us not forget the beauty..
Of one simple, single, sunrise.

© Copyright 2005 Nancy Lee - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-07-30 08:31 AM


I missed it but not this...I got to sleep in all the way to 6:24 this morning! I'm being a real lazy sleep-a-bug...

Beautiful, Enchantress...as only YOU know how to do!

Patricia
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2 posted 2005-07-30 08:54 AM


Makes you wonder why we get lost in complexities when the beauty of simplicity rises before us.

A lovely write, Nancy.

Pat

kayjay
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3 posted 2005-07-30 09:46 AM


Great verse to  match an awesome photograph.  Hugs Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2005-07-30 10:04 AM


Nancy,
You and the sunrise.

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5 posted 2005-07-30 10:28 AM


WOW....I am always amazed at the beauty of sunsets/sunrise...it keeps me ever remindful ....this is lovely....hugssss pretty lady

In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes this art

Martie
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6 posted 2005-07-30 01:50 PM


Nancy

"Let us not forget the beauty..
Of one simple, single, sunrise."

Much wisdom in these words...and such beauty to the eye!  

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7 posted 2005-07-30 02:38 PM


Nancy Lee....

Much enjoyed this and a very awesome sunrise
to complement your words.

Hugs you...

arthur
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8 posted 2005-07-30 03:13 PM


enjoyed
arthur

SmartChick
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9 posted 2005-07-30 04:23 PM


I love to see the sun rise, and look at the golden rays. I love this picture, and your poem is just perfect.
scorpio
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10 posted 2005-07-30 07:55 PM


A stirring write Tinker.  I love sunrises.  And you captured the essence of day's start beautifully.  

believe in what your heart feels...

JamesMichael
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11 posted 2005-07-30 11:45 PM


Lovely...James
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12 posted 2005-07-31 08:59 AM


Beautiful

Earth Angel
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13 posted 2005-07-31 09:52 AM



Nancy, what a divinely-expressed piece of picturesque writing!!!

May the sun rise to greet you each day, Dear Enchanting One!

Loveya!
Linda

Enchantress
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14 posted 2005-07-31 06:47 PM


You are all so very kind..
thank you each and every one,
for reading and signing my post.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

LeeJ
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15 posted 2005-08-01 12:48 PM


this needs to go back upto the top, for a Monday morning read...how beautifully uplifting..thank you
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16 posted 2005-08-01 03:20 PM


Let us not forget the beauty..
Of one simple, single, sunrise.


My dear Nancy Lee, what beautiful words to end
your wonderful poem with. I love the rise and set
of the sun. Both are so peaceful. And, they are
so romantic, too. the sunset on the beach, or water
anywhere is one of the most beautiful sights
of God's creations. Thanks for sharing your sunrise with us, dear lady.

And, I just have to tell you, I love your new picture up there. Your hairdo is so beautiful,
my friend.
Hugs,
Ethel


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17 posted 2005-08-03 09:45 PM


nicely written Nancy - Paul
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