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evomx5
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since 2005-07-11
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0 posted 2005-07-27 08:46 AM



She sent him another picture, today
A cute little pose and he loves the way
That she’s done her hair and the dress she has on
And it makes him happy and it makes him long

To wrap her in his arms and hold her tight
Hug her and kiss her all through the night
And show her he loves her beyond any doubt
Tell her she’s the one he can’t live without

The note with the picture tells him she’s true
“I want you, I need you, I love you
Please send one of you, I miss you so much
There’s nothing I wouldn’t do to feel your touch”

A tinge of sadness mixed with delight
As he reads her message and thinks of their plight
He knows that the distance keeps them apart
But, the love they share and keep in their hearts

Will help them to weather the time they must wait
Searching and seeking the hands of fate
That will let them, finally, be together
To love each other, forever and ever.

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1 posted 2005-07-27 08:50 AM


ah  love a romantic heart

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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2 posted 2005-07-27 08:56 AM


this gives love a whole new meaning, with deepest intimacy only known by you and she...well done!
Earth Angel
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3 posted 2005-07-27 09:02 AM


Now that is the kind of love that should be together forever!

Incredilbly romantic! Flowers


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yv
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4 posted 2005-07-27 09:08 AM


Wow...if only that were true for me!

Oh...Welcome to Passions!!  Your work is going to be a very therapuetic outlet for not only you but the readers...namely me.  I liked this poem!

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

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