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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-07-27 07:19 AM


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Wings of the Mind

My wings are made of colored views
Transparent lights and deeper hues’
From angers croft to greens of soft
It’s thus I fly in flights aloft.

Glide among the topic floral
Those of sweet and other Loral
And feed upon the nectar lain
No second thoughts, without disdain

I fly the circle of the globe
From mountains to the desserts probe
From members of the communard
To daffodils of avant-garde

And in the flowers of this field
I seek the dower of its yield.
The magic of its beauties store
The secrets of its inner core

It will be done, if not by me
Then I pray, it will by thee.


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Dark Angel
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1 posted 2005-07-27 07:22 AM


Woohoo, darn it I wish I could write like this.

Just perfect and a

Maree

take bread away from me, if you wish, take air away. but do not take from me your laughter.

~neruda~

LeeJ
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2 posted 2005-07-27 07:40 AM


Whooooaaaa!  
Good Morning Sy...
Extremely powerful reality you have served us up this morning...

hugs

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2005-07-27 08:24 AM


Good morning, Mr. T.!

A poetic meal such as this was definitely worth serving up again! ~ and my partaking of it!

Soul-touchingly delicious!

This most assuredly is a

It is not only your mind that has wings!

Love & Angel Light,
EA
Flower

MGROVES
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4 posted 2005-07-27 08:30 AM


morning sir

bless you and may your day be one filled
with joy~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Sunshine
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5 posted 2005-07-27 08:31 AM




REPOST!!!!


scorpio
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6 posted 2005-07-27 08:51 AM


Your words take wing this morning Sy. Well done.

believe in what your heart feels...

Janet Marie
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7 posted 2005-07-27 12:04 PM


My wings are made of colored views
Transparent lights and deeper hues’
From angers croft to greens of soft
It’s thus I fly in flights aloft.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

oh yes you do....you fly on wings of rhymes divine and that verse is poetic gold...
Ya fluttered right into me mothy heart.

*ww*

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