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Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2005-07-25 05:13 PM


Always a vision of home even when home isn’t known or a vision

Always a thought of might be in the dark of a cold windy night that is

Always a thought that you could stay and conquer fears and deliver

What isn’t wanted

Always a thought it could have been and you had the power and strength

To make it so

In a vision
In a thought
In fear
In deliverance
In power
In strength

On a dark cold windy night


© Copyright 2005 Dave Page - Cirencester UK - All Rights Reserved
Caraway
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1 posted 2005-07-25 05:35 PM


Welld done Bodger!
Juju
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In your dreams
2 posted 2005-07-25 05:37 PM


I liked this alot.  It seems like  passage from a book.

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
3 posted 2005-07-25 06:41 PM


No it's not from a book.

It from the inside of people and that is the way my thought is going at the moment.

Decisions people make that are from the insides and everyone has the right to decide whether to stay or go and I wasn't thinking about personal relationships but external relationships that are internal relationships to the person.

Bit long winded on the explanation but that was my meaning.

Bodger

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2005-07-25 08:06 PM


Nice...James
Sunshine
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5 posted 2005-07-25 08:12 PM


If, I may, I believe what Juju meant, was it reads as a passage of thought, something that we might read in a book on helping one get through the rough moments.

No, indeed, Bodger, this is yours, all yours...as I know first-hand that you would never print anything except with the possible matter of it being "from your own book" of life.

Well done, Sir!

SimplyGold
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6 posted 2005-07-25 08:22 PM


Yes, always a thought!

SG

Enjoyed.

Bodger
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7 posted 2005-07-27 05:35 PM


Thanks

Sorry I over-reacted

Bodger

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